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Entropy sucks the ink off the page,
Pulling,
Tugging,
Erasing.
The words are pulled in,
Into the silent screaming vortex
Until no meaning remains.
All is consumed.
The vortex eats all
And still hungers
And hungers
And hungers.
It wants emotion,
It wants what it can't feel,
What it can never feel.
It wants
Action,
Reaction,
Release,
Return.
So it pulls and erases
Until
You.
Stop.
Existing.
:iconimmortalecstasydream:

Author's Comments

Yeah, entropy, yeah. :XD: ENTROPISTS, UNITE!

Also, what the hell is with this new critique system? Is it supposed to be motivation to buy a sub? "ooooh, if I buy a sub, suddenly more people will want to critique me?" As if.

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:iconbloodyweepingwillow:
Nicely done. Love it. :)

--
:blackrose: Don't call me honey...
~*Lorea Krisaga*~
:blackrose:
:iconimmortalecstasydream:
:) Thanks!

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Everything is ruined forever.
:iconbloodyweepingwillow:
You're welcome. :)

--
:blackrose: Don't call me honey...
~*Lorea Krisaga*~
:blackrose:
:iconinkyluca:
Gives me the mental image of what happens when a brain atrophies. :o

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We all must have a belief in something. I believe I'll have another glass of wine. :absolut:
:iconhannah-m-bella:
yeah i don't quite understand the critique thing either O.o

"Action,
Reaction"

cool part :D

--
I barely have the motivation
They say I suffer from a lack of seratonin
Synapses they happen too infrequently for me
To be functioning properly

~Modern Chemistry ~Motion City Soundtrack


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