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Deathly Desire by ~ImmortalEcstasyDream:iconImmortalEcstasyDream:

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The hateful deity of darkness and death
Into its creation breathes its last breath.
The monster of desire, envy, and greed
Returns nothing but its own evil creed.
It twists its subjects hearts and souls
Through hatred and avarice, taking its toll.
It'll turn them into mindless drones,
With absolutely no will of their own.
They'll succumb to the shadows of empty desire
Until they're part of the undead mire.
©2008-2009 ~ImmortalEcstasyDream
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Submitted: January 12, 2008
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I wrote this for the "Undead, Darkness, and Desire" contest run by =Artheeria. Check it out here: [link]
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~Paper-Skyx:iconPaper-Skyx: Jan 12, 2008, 8:46:42 PM
love it! Especially line 5 (: :+fav:

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"I have known many,
and liked not a few,
but loved only one
and this toast is to you."
-An Irish Toast :shamrock:
~ImmortalEcstasyDream:iconImmortalEcstasyDream: Jan 12, 2008, 8:57:48 PM
Thank you, and thanks for the fav!

Excellent quote in your sig. Gotta love Chicago.

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Everything is ruined forever.
~rikuhottie263:iconrikuhottie263: Jan 12, 2008, 10:33:02 PM
awesome. simply awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :clap:

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like, and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve."
~Bilbo Baggins ~LotR

my other site~ [link]
=Artheeria:iconArtheeria: Jan 12, 2008, 10:49:36 PM
You did a wonderful job. *grins* A beautiful submission. I wish you the best of luck.

My favorite was the last two lines. :devilish:

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"If you can't be the best, than just be useful. Otherwise, I'll have to kill you."
~Assirra Xorlarrin
~ImmortalEcstasyDream:iconImmortalEcstasyDream: Jan 13, 2008, 8:44:48 AM
:bow: Thank you!

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Everything is ruined forever.
~ImmortalEcstasyDream:iconImmortalEcstasyDream: Jan 13, 2008, 8:45:06 AM
Thank you!

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Everything is ruined forever.
~Paper-Skyx:iconPaper-Skyx: Jan 13, 2008, 9:46:42 AM
no prob! chicago is teh shit :heart:

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"I have known many,
and liked not a few,
but loved only one
and this toast is to you."
-An Irish Toast :shamrock:
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