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I Don't Want This by ~ImmortalEcstasyDream:iconImmortalEcstasyDream:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Open


I don’t want this --- --- --- I don't want this
To hurt you. --- --- ---
                            --- --- --- Let me choose
I know what’s best. --- --- --- I know what's best
You don’t. --- --- --- You don't
                --- --- --- Know me.
                --- --- --- Leave me alone.
I’m trying to help.
                          --- --- --- Don't help me.
                          --- --- --- I don't need help.
                          --- --- --- I'm fine.
You’re not fine,
You need this. --- --- --- You need this
                       --- --- --- To fill your quota
                       --- --- --- Of medicated crazies.
You’re not crazy.
Stop treating me --- --- --- Stop treating me
Like I am --- --- --- Like I am!
A criminal.
                        --- --- --- I don't need you.
Maybe I can help you.
                        --- --- --- Maybe I don't need your help.
                        --- --- --- I'll
Just leave. --- --- --- Just leave.
We’re done for today. --- --- --- We're done for today.
©2009 ~ImmortalEcstasyDream
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Author's Comments

So, this is from that English project I wrote a journal about a while ago. This is definitely my favorite piece of the ones I did. It's a two-voice poem, the columns being my character, Caitlin, and her therapist (2nd and 1st columns respectively).

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~mangachu Jan 14, 2009, 3:29:01 PM
Hmm, very interesting form love. Original, I love it. :nod:

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Now 20% more alive.

"OH GOD," screamed Astley, his hands over his ears, "I really am THAT terrible!"
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~ImmortalEcstasyDream Jan 14, 2009, 4:04:33 PM
:D Thanks!

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Everything is ruined forever.
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*hannah-m-bella Jan 14, 2009, 4:54:23 PM
yeah, i agree with ry-ry :D this is VERY interesting~ !

ohhh so who's your character Caitlin?

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I barely have the motivation
They say I suffer from a lack of seratonin
Synapses they happen too infrequently for me
To be functioning properly

~Modern Chemistry ~Motion City Soundtrack

my other site~ [link]
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~ImmortalEcstasyDream Jan 14, 2009, 4:55:03 PM
She's someone I just invented for this project, although I might do more with her eventually.

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Everything is ruined forever.
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~louie9090 Jan 16, 2009, 8:18:29 AM
It's mahvolous. The form is very interesting.

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Where are we going... and why are we in a handbasket?

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~ImmortalEcstasyDream Jan 16, 2009, 8:53:37 AM
:D Thanks! It was fun to try the form out; I've never done it before.

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Everything is ruined forever.
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